I always like to be quiet
Quiet is my little world
I always have a diet
Quiet is my house all the time
I never like to talk
When I talk I feel dumb
It's always hard to walk
Walk on the noise of my heart
Quiet because of your fault
You always used me like a toy
I always wanted you to hault
Now my qorld is all quiet
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A Stage for Student Writing
"We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars."
-Oscar Wilde
-Oscar Wilde
Aspiring Authors
- Anabel (6th grade) (23)
- Sonia (7th grade) (21)
- Tony (8th grade) (19)
- Miss Cragun (15)
- Marco (6th grade) (14)
- Ana (10th grade) (13)
- Elvia (7th grade) (12)
- Gabe (8th grade) (11)
- Miss Frazier (11)
- Gabi (7th grade) (10)
- Ivan (8th grade) (9)
- Guest Poets (6)
- Thai (11th grade) (6)
3 comments:
I love the line about "walk on the noise of my heart." It's very profound, I think.
This is interesting...I feel like there is more to it...I think there needs to be a part II :).
I don't know if I understand. Are you quiet be you like to be quiet or are you quiet because of the way someone treated you?
I really like it and I think I can relate.
I too, like the line "walk on the noise of my heart." Good word choice!
Anabel,
I have a lot to say about your poem. First, I think you're very quiet... until 6th period! I love it when you're silly and you share your giggly side with us. Second, don't feel dumb when you talk because you always have very smart things to say! Third, I really like the line "It's always hard to walk on the noise of my heart"!! I feel the same way! Finally, don't let anyone use you like a toy. If they do, then let me at 'em! Ha ha.
:)
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