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Monday, April 21

"The Rain" by Thai


I walk through the path where flowers grow

I stop and stare

but no one was there

I heard a cry

Moments go by


I heard a crash with flashing light everywhere

You can see people running from here to there

I look up and felt the drop on my face

With a moment like this, it can't be erased

6 comments:

Anonymous said...

I could really image the walk. I particularly liked your last line, "with a moment like this, it can't be erased." Nice job! Maggie

Tiffany said...

I felt like I was inside your poem as I read it! I felt the raindrop...

Anonymous said...

this is a cool poem and it rhymes nicely.

Anonymous said...

good

-tony

Senorita Cragun said...

Thai!! This is a GREAT poem! I really think you did an amazing job describing the moment. Any reader can easily visualize this moment!

Anonymous said...

it was one of the best poems i read....it was awesome