I walk through the path where flowers grow
I stop and stare
but no one was there
I heard a cry
Moments go by
I heard a crash with flashing light everywhere
You can see people running from here to there
I look up and felt the drop on my face
With a moment like this, it can't be erased
6 comments:
I could really image the walk. I particularly liked your last line, "with a moment like this, it can't be erased." Nice job! Maggie
I felt like I was inside your poem as I read it! I felt the raindrop...
this is a cool poem and it rhymes nicely.
good
-tony
Thai!! This is a GREAT poem! I really think you did an amazing job describing the moment. Any reader can easily visualize this moment!
it was one of the best poems i read....it was awesome
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