We were together, me and you
Like animals in a zoo
Me and you bought a shoe
You put it on and I did, too
Me and you said we had the flu
When we got outside, we saw the cutest view
When we were outside we saw a kangaroo
He chewed you up and I said, "Eew!"
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2 comments:
its good!!
-Gabe
This may seem like a weird comment, but I like your use of commas. like in your first line, "we were together, me and you" I like the the pacing of lines that are broken up that way, Maggie
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