You touch the warm water
The sand is soft
You hear people talk
You can hear the waves crashing
You can smell the food in the air
You can smell the sunscreen
You taste the salt in the water
You can taste the mud
You can see sharks coming for you
You see kites in the sky
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3 comments:
Marco, I really like how you used all your 5 senses to describe the beach... I can't wait for summer! Let's take a field trip to the beach!!
That was great! I felt like I was at the beach!
it was ok but you should of described the Los Angeles beaches
-Gabe
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