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Friday, May 2

"My Pet the Tiger" by Ivan

My pet the tiger
He was just laying there
I got home he had so much energy
I could smell my Mom's delicious food before I walked in
I got inside my pet the tiger jumped up with so much energy
I told him that I was going to take him out after I was done eating
He could see that I was eating
but he begged me to take him to the park
He was laying down I touch his furry back and told him let's go
I was talking to my friend that he was getting fat and he heard me
So my pet the tiger started to run
My pet the tiger did this everyday from now on
So after a week he was built

3 comments:

Scott and Jillian said...

I liked how you described the tiger. It was like he was real!

Anonymous said...

you should of included more words
-Gabe

Anonymous said...

good

-tony