Sonia is my best friend
Has a cute boyfriend
She puts lip plumper to shine her lips
She dances to belly dancing music with her hands on her hips
Every boy practices belly dancing just to get a chance with her
The boy's drool over her
As calm as she looks she likes to flirt
Her boyfriend found her flirting her heart hurt
She was too sad and quit belly dancing
When she found herself romancing
The doy asked Sonia to come over to his house
He took her outside like he said and took her out of his house
He found out Sonia loves to flirt
Then Sonia was invited to a dance and wore a mini skirt
At the dance Sonia found the perfect man
Both are Daddy Yankee's number one fan
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"We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars."
-Oscar Wilde
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- Sonia (7th grade) (21)
- Tony (8th grade) (19)
- Miss Cragun (15)
- Marco (6th grade) (14)
- Ana (10th grade) (13)
- Elvia (7th grade) (12)
- Gabe (8th grade) (11)
- Miss Frazier (11)
- Gabi (7th grade) (10)
- Ivan (8th grade) (9)
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5 comments:
I didn't know Sonia was so flirty!
Nice poem.
-Miss Cragun
This poem has a very confident structure! And it is very easy to follow and read. The subject also stays very strong all the way through.
Elvia,
Very descriptive. I liked the stanza, "She puts lip plumper to shine her lips. She dances to belly dancing music with her hands on her hips."
~ Ms. George
I kind of liked youre poem but I don't want to become a belly dancer
Sonia
I liked the story in your poem. but, I'm a firm believer that a woman without a man is like a fish without a bicycle...think about it, Maggie PS on the other hand, I'm a confirmed romantic
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